Next meeting: Annual Christmas Brunch

Please join us for our annual Christmas brunch. 
Sat. Dec. 5 ... 10am-12pm

Bring a Christmas reading to share 

along with something tasty to eat! 

(We have bagels, dessert and pasta salad so far.)

RSVP to Susan :: panzica.susan@gmail.com. 

Meeting this Saturday

Our next meeting

Saturday, November 7
10 am - noon

North Haledon Church of the Nazarene

(address on our website)

Saturday's focus: 

Tell me a story!

Bring your notebook (paper or electronic) along with your most colorful adjectives, strongest verbs, and greatest story lines.

If you have work for critique, 

please follow guidelines on our website.

Beautiful Words

From NJCWG member, Maude Carolan Pych

A friend came up to me at church one Sunday (She’s a woman who studies Scripture in depth and who also enjoys my poetry.) and said, “You are of the tribe of Napthali.” I asked what made her say that and she referred me to Gen 49:21: “Napthali is a doe let loose. He gives beautiful words.”

This verse comes from the “Blessing of Jacob,” the longest poem in Genesis, in which Jacob blesses each of his twelve sons with the appropriate blessing for each of them.

A few interesting points: Napthali, being a “son” of Jacob is described as a doe. The reason given by Rabbi David (I couldn’t make out his first name) on the “Hebrew Nation” website is that the female deer is swifter than the male. The rabbi also said that the Hebrew for “beautiful words” is Imrei shefer, which speak of musical ability and natural eloquence and that the word shefer is related to shofar, an instrument that may be used to issue warning and alarm.

Also, while looking at this verse online, I found that other versions translate “beautiful words” as “gives goodly words.” “John Gill’s Exposition of the Bible” says this verse looks ahead to the New Testament and refers to good tidings of good things (the Gospel). He says it points to the people of Christ’s time who were swift to run after Jesus and hear him; panted after him as the hart after the water brooks. The people who received and gave out the goodly words of the Gospel were made free and became like a hind let loose.

The verse caused me to think of the beautiful words/goodly words in Scripture that we use and write about. Here are examples:

Grace, salvation, holiness, righteousness, purity, Jesus, living water, eternity, eternal life, glory, forgiveness, resurrection, love, mercy, truth.

I’m sure you can think of more “beautiful words.” Use them as a springboard to write a prayer, a poem, an article, haiku, etc.

                                                                                    Maude Carolan Pych

Our Next Meeting

Saturday, October 3

10 am to noon

North Haledon Church of the Nazarene(directions on website)

Think outside the box! What topics, genres, formats await your discovery?

If you bring pages for critique, be sure you followed the guidelines on our website.

Meeting this Saturday

September is here and we're back to our monthly meeting schedule. 

Saturday, September 5

10 am to noon

North Haledon Church of the Nazarene

(directions on website)

Please be prepared to report on your summer progress and share new goals for the fall.

If you bring pages for critique, be sure you followed the guidelines on our website.

I look forward to seeing you Saturday for a time of inspiration, accountability and encouragement,

Barbara

barbarahigbyhope.com

Writing Prompts

Following is the devotional from our June meeting.

Writing prompts are all around us. Life abounds with inspiration for that next story, essay, poem or book. We simply need to keep our eyes open, our ears tuned and a notepad in our pocket. As Christian writers we have an even wider field because we see life in two dimensions, physical and spiritual.

The stories we tell, regardless of genre or format, are public declarations of what resides deep within. In its own way, each is a testimony - “a formal statement about something that we saw, know, or experienced” (Macmillan Dictionary). Convictions of the heart, things we know to be true by what we saw or experienced provide writing prompts we may overlook or dismiss.

In Cecil Murphey’s blog post of June 16, 2015, he wrote:

My biggest obstacle is to keep writing, even now, because I'm tempted to hit the delete key a dozen times a day. I constantly think, This is garbage and everybody knows it. 

My late wife, Shirley, used to say to me, "Because you think about it all the time, you assume everyone knows it. But they haven't read it the way you write it." (see blog)

How true! God speaks to us and through us in unique ways. Our personal understanding of an event or truth is expressed from an individual voice that is ours alone. 

God has made precious deposits in us. Let’s not overlook writing prompts of the heart. The psalmist gives us several in Psalm 71:15-18:

       My mouth will tell of your righteousness, of your salvation all day long...

       I will … proclaim your mighty acts, O Sovereign Lord; 

       I will proclaim your righteousness...

       I declare your marvelous deeds.

       Even when I am old and gray, do not forsake me, O God, till I declare 

       your power to the next generation, your might to all who are to come.

What has God shown you of His righteousness, salvation, mighty acts, marvelous deeds, power and might that you can write about?

Take away thought: I will tune my heart to the writing prompts of the Holy Spirit.  

Our meeting is this Saturday

Just a reminder...

Our June meeting is this Saturday, June 20, 10 am - 

our last meeting until September.

We will focus on periodicals, looking at format and writing ops.

Please bring two periodical/anthology writing opportunities and 

your summer writing goals. 

If you have work you want critiqued please follow the guidelines on our website.

Change of June Meeting Date

Our June meeting is rescheduled for Saturday, June 20, 10 am, when we will focus on periodicals, looking at format and writing ops.

Please bring two periodical/anthology writing opportunities and 

your summer writing goals. 

This will be our last meeting until September

On June 6 (our original meeting date) several of our members will be attending The Justice Conference. 

Please scroll down for information and consider attending.

Thoughts to Ponder from our May meeting:

Focus: Discovery. I consider discovery to be one of God’s best gifts and one of the greatest joys of life. Take a look at the definition:

• to gain sight or knowledge of (something previously unseen or unknown)
• to see, find, or become aware of (something) for the first time
• to learn or find out something surprising or unexpected (Mirriam-Webster)

I remember the thrill when I first realized that we won’t know everything the minute we’re in heaven but will enjoy an eternity of discovery. How could it be heaven if there was nothing new to discover or learn? 

Think about the excitement you feel when you’re in the car and spy a deer grazing by the side of the road - or spot the first crocus of spring - or hear your child or grandchild reveal an ability you’d not yet seen - or discover a deeper meaning to a familiar Scripture passage - or, as a writer, find just the right word for the description you’re writing. 

Understanding can hinder discovery, in every area of life. When we’re certain we have things figured out and clearly understand our position, we don’t keep our eyes open or hearts alert. I don’t want that to happen with our writing gifts. Recently, I attended a webinar about children’s writing and, even though it's not a genre that interests me, discovering it as a possibility was energizing. Let’s not limit ourselves to a particular genre or style or project, but have ears to hear the Holy Spirit’s prompting and a curiosity that will test new waters.

Psalm 31:19 says, "How great is your goodness, which you have stored up for those who fear you, which you bestow in the sight of men on those who take refuge in you."

Who knows what blessings lay in store for us? I don’t want us to miss a single one.

Take home thought: Let’s not decide what God wants for our lives and close our hearts, but discover the surprises He has for us along the journey.

www.thejusticeconference.com

www.thejusticeconference.com

May Meeting this Saturday

I blinked and it's the last week in April, which means our May meeting is here already.

Saturday, May 2

10 am - noon

We will meet as usual at High Mountain Church, but in the all-purpose room.

The entrance is at the back of the building.

Please see the website for directions.

Please bring work to critique (guidelines on website).

We will briefly discuss options for writing children's books.

If this is not a venue you're interested in, don't be deterred from attending.

I'm certain you will pick up tips and be inspired.   

Here are the Thoughts to Ponder from April's meeting.

Focus: Show, Don’t Tell, according to James the Apostle

Telling is the lazy writer’s way. It’s less creative, less costly, less inspiring than showing. This is true in writing and it is true in life.

     Easy: The cat contentedly sat on the old woman’s lap, both with closed eyes.

     Easy: I’m in the process of writing a book.

     Easy: I believe, I have faith in God and you should too.

     Hard, but better: She tucked a stray gray strand behind her ear and rested her hand on the purring        pet in her lap. Both closed their eyes, one in sleep, one in prayer.

     Hard, but better: Yesterday I wrote 500 words of chapter two. I plan to write 500 words, five days      a week… or 500 words a week… or… I sent a proposal to three publishers this week…

     Hard, but better: Walking, living, acting according to faith-based decisions. “Faith, by itself, if it is      not accompanied by action, is dead” James 2:17.   “Show me your faith without deeds, and I will        show you my faith by what I do” (2:18b). “Do not merely listen to the word… Do what it says”          (1:22).

Showing requires more thought and energy; more writing and rewriting; more doing, less talking.

The main goal of NJCWG is to write and to be read. Each month we encourage each other to write and persist and grow in excellence. So… keep on going on. Research, read, write, rewrite, submit, blog. You are a writer, write!

Take home thought: My writing, and my lifestyle, is best when I show, don’t tell.

Write for Him!

Barbara Higby

barbarahigbyhope.com

Reminder: Meeting this Saturday, April 11

Our April meeting is the second Saturday, 4/11, due to Easter celebrations.

• Please note our change in time: 9-11:00 am (this meeting only).
• Bring paper, tablet or laptop for a creative writing exercise. 
• If you have work for critique, please adhere to guidelines on our website. 

                                                                      Hope to see you on Saturday,

                                                                      Barbara

                                                                      barbarahigbyhope.com

Whose Story Is It?

That question was the "Thought to Ponder" at our March meeting.

Everyone has his or her own story - one that is different from everyone else's - a story that is woven with individual threads of varying color and distinctive stitch combinations. Even when the events in two lives are alike and details are similar, the unique, personal distinctions of each individual make their story unique. If God tells us in Psalm 139 that He saw each of us before we were born and, not only recorded every day of our lives in His book, but also laid out every moment of our lives before we lived a day, I can be assured that my story is my own and your story is your own.

Image courtesy of Simon Howden at FreeDigitalPhotos.net

Individual stories - yours and mine - have value when others connect to our experiences, or learn from them, or are inspired and encouraged. However, when our story becomes God's story we enter a whole new dimension. Now the story is not about actors and actions and drama, but about the writer. Now the glory is not given to the cast, but the One who assembled the cast for puposes beyond what we see on life's stage or can understand.

In him we were also chosen, having been predestined according to the plan of him who works out everything in conformity with the purpose of his will, in order that we... might be for the praise of   his glory. (Eph. 1:11-12)

What does this have to do with our writing? Any tale we write of success or victory will inspire, but when that tale reflects the Author's brilliance and reveals the depth of His wisdom and knowledge, discloses Him as the Designer of time and space, the competent architect of destiny, our readers receive more than a simple human story can offer. As His vessels, we are empowered to impart life and hope. I encourage you to remember that ours is a high calling.

Take Home Thought: My story has more value when it's His story.

Please note the change in date & time for our April meeting:

April 11, 9:00 am to noon

We will have a creative writing exercise using colors. (How many ways can you say blue without saying "blue"?) We will allow time for critiques afterward.

Please check the website for directions and critique guidelines.

NJCWG meets this Saturday

Photo by Stuart Miles at freedigitalphotos.net

Learn about Twitter at our March meeting, 3/7, from 10am to noon.

Hear about the ins & outs of tweeting, as presented by Elise Daly Parker.

If possible, register with Twitter before the meeting and bring your tablet or laptop.

We meet at High Mountain Church in North Haledon. 

Details can be found on our web page, as well as guidelines for critique pieces.

Whatever your level of writing experience, you are welcome.

Meeting - Sat. Feb. 7

 

 

 

Meeting this Saturday, Feb. 7  10:00 am - 12:00 noon

 

High Mountain Church

681 High Mountain Rd.

No. Haledon, NJ

 

 

Click here for the assignment for Saturday's meeting.

 

We'll be critiquing the devotions we've written according to the Judson Press guidelines. 

February's Assignment

Photo by winnond at freedigitalphotos.net

That's right! You read correctly. We have homework for our next meeting... 

February 7, 10 am - noon

...so I'm giving you an early meeting reminder.

Read the specifications for devotions at Judson Press and write a devotional. We will share our work at the February meeting, critiquing the devos with special attention to their adherence to the guidelines specified by Judson. Happy writing! And for those who want to submit a Christmas story to Chicken Soup, you have 19 days to do so.

Thoughts to Ponder from our January meeting:

Personally, my word for the year is complete. I shared my thoughts about this word at our January meeting because it's important that we apply it to our writing.

Our 2015 writing goals and efforts should move us to completion. Since I already blogged about this on my personal site, I won't repeat myself here. Please visit barbarahigbyhope.com for the thoughts I shared at the NJCWG meeting. 

 "...he who began a good work in you will carry it on to completion until the day of Christ Jesus." Phil 1:6 NIV

Write for Him,

Barbara

Our next meeting is January 10, 9-11am

It's here - 2015!

New year, new goals! Please note the difference in week and time for our January meeting. We're meeting the second Saturday, 1/10, an hour earlier than usual, 9am.

Be prepared by polishing your goals for 2015. Create S.M.A.R.T. Goals - 
Specific, Measurable, Attainable, Realistic, Timely. Please be as specific as you can, including possible venues for publication, but be realistic. If possible, bring two page for critique (guidelines are on our website sidebar, njcwg.blogspot.com).

Our session on twittering will be rescheduled for a future meeting. 

See you Saturday!
Barbara
barbarahigbyhope.com 

December Meeting ~ Christmas Brunch

Sat., December 6th

10:00-12:00

Please join us for our annual Christmas Brunch.

In the High Mountain Church cafe:

681 High Mountain Rd.

No. Haledon, NJ 

At our last meeting and through email, a few people stated what they are bringing (listed below). Please rsvp if you can come and what you are bringing.  
RSVP to this email or njcwgroup@gmail.com.   

• Elaine: quiche
• Maude: salmon spread  
• Barbara H: paper goods
• Susan P: winter salad
• Chris S: chocolate meltaway cake
• Sr. Jane: fruit salad

Our focus will be Fun with Words. Using Christmas objects, we'll practice the use of literary devices such as simile/metaphor, personification and alliteration.  

​Hope to see you all there!! 


ps - Leslie, John, Karen, Barbara R: we'll miss you! Wish you a Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

The Search is On

Thoughts to ponder

from our November meeting

                                                                                                                                     freedigitalphotos.com

 The Search is On

Do you ever fixate on a word? You’re writers - I know you do this. I was thinking about the word search, realizing how active it is. You can’t be a passive searcher. Then I thought about the fact that God likes us to search. He commends a searching heart and promises in Jeremiah 29:13 that if we search for Him, we will find God when we seek Him with all our heart.

The Bible also tells us to search for wisdom, search for the lost, search our hearts, and search the Word. It says a searching heart will not be disappointed, "Ask and it will be given to you; seek and you will find; knock and the door will be opened to you” (Matt 7:7).

As a writer, my least favorite aspect of writing is the search

·                     Searching for the right words

·                     Searching for answers - research

·                     Searching for publishers

·                     Searching for platforms, illustrations, anecdotes, pictures for blogs, opportunities…

It can be tedious and, for me, at least, it’s the number one cause for procrastination.

But think about it - without the search, there’s no joy of discovery. There's no aha moment. Be encouraged. Searching, researching is part of the writing package.

Take Away Thought: Searching is part of the journey and, without it, there’s no joy of discovery.

Do you play with words? How about letters? I recently had fun with the letter P. I invite you to take the P challenge on my blog, barbarahigbyhope.com

Our next meeting will be a Christmas Brunch on December 6th. Details will follow.

Our November meeting is Saturday, 11/1

God graces His people with gifts. Ephesians 4:11 mentions five of God's many gifts: apostles, prophets, evangelists, pastors and teachers. Do you notice what they have in common? Each one is a gift of words. Whether or not we have one of those specific gifts, we have been graced with a love for and talent with words. It's what unites us at this meeting (or at this website).

We will meet from 10 am to noon at High Mountain Church of the Nazarene.

See website sidebar for location & general information.

• Elaine O'Neill will share tips from the writing conference she attended.
• Come prepared with paper & pen, laptop or tablet for a writing exercise.
• We may forego critiques, but if you have something you're ready to submit to a publisher and need feedback, please bring it. 

                                                      Thoughts to Ponder 

                                                     from October's meeting

Later in the chaper we learn why these word gifts were given: “to prepare God's people for works of service, so that the body of Christ may be built up until we all reach unity in the faith and in the knowledge of the Son of God and become mature, attaining to the whole measure of the fullness of Christ.”

Wrapped Gifts by Marina Shemesh     

They are given to be shared and to bear fruit:

·         To prepare God’s people to serve

·         To bring unity

·         To increase the knowledge of Jesus

·         To become mature believers

In verse 29 we read that our words should build others up and benefit them. Like any gift, words come with responsibility and with a high calling.

Take Home Thought: Our words are more than print on paper. They have power and purpose to bring encouaragement, unity, maturity and knowledge of Christ as they prepare readers to serve. 

Barbara Higby

barbarahigbyhope.com

Next Meeting - Sat. Oct. 4 - "Lessons Learned"

NJCWG meeting

Saturday - October 4

10:00 am - 12:00 noon

High Mountain Church, 681 High Mountain Rd., No. Haledon

Susan Panzica will share some lessons learned from attending a writers' conference, addressing both the craft and the business of writing.

Then we will break into small critique groups. Please bring 4 copies of your work to share with your group: no more than two pages, double spaced. Please note critique guidelines in blog's sidebar .

September's Thoughts to Ponder

Just start… or restart

Ideas swarm a writer’s mind, buzzing at inopportune times, like when we’re at our day job or trying to sleep at night. Thoughts are plentiful; the challenge lies in pinning them down. We need to sit at the keyboard and just start. In my case, an even greater challenge is to restart. To take that piece I thought I honed to perfection and rewrite it. One of the most dreaded words a writer hears has to be rewrite.

My summer goal was to sew up three projects I had finished - research publishers, write proposals, submit them, and be done with them. I was eager to do this and set fresh goals for the fall so, in June, I tackled the book I most want to publish. I suspected that I repeatedly used a weak phrase, so I purposed to speed read through the manuscript and edit that phrase. My quick scan was a disaster. Reading the manuscript with fresh eyes, I realized the writing was terse and disjointed. With growing alarm I realized I needed to rewrite it. The idea of rewriting what I thought was a finished project, overwhelmed me. I prayed my despair and, that night, lying sleeplessly in bed, a fresh approach took shape.

It’s September and today we will share the fall goals we want to start. Mine is not what I imagined or hoped because my goal is to restart. I will rewrite the book I thought was finished. I will pick through the rubble and rebuild my manuscript.

Facing this task, I considered the Israelites’ dilemma when they faced a destroyed temple and the overwhelming task to rebuild it. In the book of Haggai they were asked, “Who of you is left who saw this house in its former glory? How does it look to you now? Does it not seem to you like nothing?” (2:3). That’s how I felt about my manuscript. Any former glory I thought it possessed now seemed like nothing.

Three times Haggai told the people to be strong. Chapter two, verse four reads, “’Be strong, all you people of the land,' declares the Lord, 'and work. For I am with you,' declares the Lord Almighty.” That’s what I needed, a cheerleader telling me to be strong and work, assuring me that God is with me.

Then the Lord said, “The silver is mine and the gold is mine” and promised, “The glory of this present house will be greater than the glory of the former house” (2:8-9). I acknowledged that my ability is His, my gifts are His, my time is His, my life is His. Something better can come out of something that was good because of God’s supply and direction.

Take Home Thought: As we begin our fall goals, whether they include starting or restarting, let’s be strong, and work, for God is with us and equips us - for His glory.

Our next meeting is October 4, 10 am -12 noon.