Next Meeting - Please Note

Please note...
Our meetings are usually held in rear room on the first floor the church Ringwood Baptist Church. Our next meeting (Monday, March 14) will be held in an UPSTAIRS room because the Ringwood Christian school will be hosting their school open house the same night as our writers meeting. Rather than cancel (again), I'm going to move the meeting to another room. The parking lot may be more crowded than usual and there will be a number of people wandering around the church - so I wanted to warn you about this.

There will be sign on the doors (big, white double doors) indicating where the meeting will be held. When you enter those doors, you simply go UP the staircase (on your right). At the top of the stairs continue down the hall. We will be in the THIRD room on the left. Again, a sign will be on the door.

Looking forward to seeing you all again - I've missed our meetings. Copies of the 2005 Christian Market Guide will be available at this meeting.

Louise Bergmann DuMont
Author of Faith-Dipped Chocolate & Grace by the Cup
word.worker@verizon.net

Forensics & Faith Blog - Brandilyn Collins

Brandilyn Collins recently began a blog about her writing journey -- Forensics & Faith, A forum for readers and writers of Christian suspense. It is the story of a woman who began writing, failed, gave up writing, felt the "need" to write, accepted correction, learned from her mistakes and went on to become an exceptional contemporary fiction author. This year she was one of Zondervan's top selling authors. She now teaches fiction classes around the country at the best conferences.

To read her blog, you can go to the following website:
http://www.forensicsandfaith.blogspot.com/

Note that as of today (March 3) the message on the top of Brandilyn's blog is #6. You would have to go to the bottom of the blog to read message #1.

Louise

New & Improved Blog - links/email

Our blog has TWO great new features. I think you will find them very helpful.

1. Links
On the left side of the blog page you will now find a "Links" section. I've included a number of writing related websites that you might find helpful:

Louise Bergmann DuMont Website (my chocolate/coffee)
The Writer Mag (The Writer Magazine Website)
Inkwell Newswatch (One of the Top 10 writers information sites)
RhymeZone (Anything and everything you need to rhyme right)
WordSmithShoppe (Word Smith Shoppe - one of the BEST market information sites)
Market Guide Pages (Sally Stuart's Webpage)
Christian Books (Christian Books galore)
Images-Google (millions of images you can use)
Writers Digest (Writers Digest Magazine's Website)
Quote Land (lots of great ways to look up quotations)
Agent-Janet Grant (my agent's website)
Google (Search Engine)

2. Emailing Me
You can now connect to my email address right from the blog. On the very top right you will see the names of four people - mine is the first name. Click on my name and it will take you to my bio. On the bottom left of the bio page you'll see the word EMAIL highlighted. Click on that email link and it will pull up your email program with my email address right in the TO section.

This should make sending me a message much easier. You also don't have to worry about which email address you'll get because the only one listed in the blog is my home email - the one you are supposed to use.

Hope these little additions make using our blog easier for you.

Louise
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Writing Op - Vol 2 - Heart of a Father

FROM WAYNE HOLMES
CALL FOR WRITERS - THE HEART OF A FATHER, VOL 2

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Fellow Writers,

The Heart of a Father, Volume 2 is a new book project I am editing and compiling for Bethany House Publishers. I am looking for writers who are interested in contributing true stories about earthly fathers who’ve done something that reflects the image of the heavenly father. Stories should be 500 to 2000 words in length.

Subjects for each chapter might include the following: Wisdom, Love, Discipline, Teaching, Forgiveness, Perspective, Provision, Comfort, and Fellowship

Your story can be humorous, inspiring, eye-opening, or thoughtful, but must have a strong application without being preachy. Write from your heart and make me feel how this story affected you in a positive way. You are welcome to submit more than one story.

If your story is published you will receive a $75 honorarium and a free copy of the book when it is released. You retain the rights to your story. I also consider reprints. Contributors may purchase additional copies at 50% off the listed price plus shipping and handling charges. (Price is undetermined at this point but will probably be about $15.) Of course, your bio will be included with your story. This is a great chance to see your writing in a book with a host of other wonderful authors, just like yourself.

I will be accepting stories from March 1 until May 31, 2005. You may send E-mail submissions to wwriter@fuse.net (no hard copies). I prefer a Word document sent as an attachment, but I can also open WordPerfect files. You may also paste your story into the body of an e-mail. Send all submissions to: wwriter@fuse.net.

Thanks in advance for helping to make this project a success. I look forward to reading your story.

Please feel free to pass these guidelines on to any interested party. For an online version of these guidelines visit:

http://www.homestead.com/WayneHolmes1/Call_for_Stories.html. I also have a link to a sample story listed at this site.

God Bless,

Wayne Holmes

Wayne Holmes: www.WayneHolmes.com
The Heart of a Father: www.TheHeartofaFather.com
The Heart of a Mother: www.TheHeartofaMother.com
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ALA Link

**SEE PREVIOUS MESSAGE FROM MAUDE**
Here is a link to the American Library Association with some addtional information about the Woman's Day library program. I plan to attend in Montclair and hope that each of you will consider attending as well. Thank you, Maude, for bringing this to our attention!!!

http://www.ala.org/ala/pio/campaign/sponsorship/putwritingyour.htm

Woman's Day Sponsors - Put It In Writing @ Your Library

CALLING ALL WRITERS...
I was thumbing through a copy of "Woman's Day" and found something that may be of interest to our North Jersey writers, especially those interested in writing for a magazine. "Woman's Day" and the American Library Association will be sponsoring the 4th annual, "Put It in Writing @ Your Library" writers' workshops, and one will be conducted here in North Jersey on April 12 at:

MONTCLAIR PUBLIC LIBRARY
50 South Fullerton Avenue
Montclair, NJ 07042
(973)744-0500

This is a one-day, two-hour workshop, taught by WD writers and library staff. Other workshops will be held at various libraries across the country. The focus will be on crafting query letters, developing story ideas and doing research. For more information, call the library or log on to www.womansday.com/writers.

Quotable Quote - Mother Teresa

By Mother Teresa
"We are all pencils in the hand of a writing God, who is sending love letters to the world."

Market Guides Are In

I did receive my standing order of Sally Stuart's Christian Market Guide. I still have two copies unspoken for and will bring ALL the copies to our next meeting, March 14.

If you want a copy and have not paid for one yet, bring $20.00 to the meeting and the copies will be distributed there.

Louise Bergmann DuMont

NO MEETING 2/28/05

THERE WILL BE NO MEETING OF THE NJCWG ON MONDAY, FEBRUARY 28, 2005

I realize that this may be a bit premature but I wanted everyone to know the meeting is cancelled - due to the possibility of an imminent snow storm. Some of you may not be aware, but our group has people who travel from as far away as New York & Pennsylvania. I would hate for someone to get stuck on the road simply because they did not know we cancelled the meeting.

NEXT MEETING
Because we had to cancel the 2/28 meeting, we will move the "review" session of show vs. tell to our March 14 meeting. This will push our workshop to the last meeting in March.
Monday, March 14, 2005
6:15-7:00 Chat Time
7:00-8:00 Teaching
8:00-9:00 critiques

Monday March 28, 2005
WRITING WORKSHOP
6:15-9:00 We begin precisely at 6:15.

If anyone has something that can't wait until our next meeting, please do call me and we can get together beforehand.

Louise Bergmann DuMont
Facilitator of the NJCWG
www.louisedumont.com

Free Novel by Randy Ingermanson

Randy Ingermanson's latest novel, Retribution, is being offered as a free gift to anyone willing to hand out twenty-five brochures describing his book.

Randy Ingermanson is a physicist, novelist, writing teacher and publisher. Yes, by his own admission he's joined the dark side and launched his own publishing company. This year he will be teaching major fiction tracks at five Christian writing conferences.

His heart leads him to share his writing expertise with as many writers as possible. To do this he is launching the Advanced Fiction Writing E-zine a FREE email newsletter on the craft and marketing of fiction.

Quote by Randy Ingermanson: "This E-zine is for both published and unpublished writers, both CBA and ABA. In another week or so, I expect to have my 500th subscriber signed up. What's all the excitement about? Come check it out . . .
http://www.rsingermanson.com/index.html "

I've signed up for this newsletter myself and suggest that anyone interested in fiction writing do the same. You might also want to check out Randy's famous "snowflake" method of writing. He's posted a sample of this method on his website.

God Bless
Louise Bergmann DuMont
www.louisedumont.com

Poetry Reading - May 21

To: NJCWG Poets
I will provide information about the
Inspirational Poetry Reading, to be
held Saturday, May 21, 1 - 3 p.m.,
at Christian Publications Bookstore,
Rte. 23N, Pompton Plains, at our next
writer's group meeting, Monday,
February 28. See you there!
Maude

Writers Resource - Inkwell Newswatch

Here is a GREAT new writers ezine - Inkwell Newswatch, News And Views For Working Writers. It has only been in existance since January 2005 and Google already lists it as one of the top ten writing ezines. That is quite an accomplishment! Inkwell has a nice 'edgy' look, facinating interviews, helpful articles and some of the best industry and market info I've seen.

In This Month's Issue: news, education, reviews, writing resources, interviews, genre info (poetry, screenwriting, fiction, nonfiction, TV/radio, children's lit, comedy, journalism), columns, event listsing and one of my favorities -- the writers life.

Try at least a few of the itmes listed above and I have little doubt that you'll be back again soon.

http://www.fwointl.com/in.html

NO Meeting Tonight

Just a reminder - there is NO meeting tonight.

Our regularly scheduled meeting is
Monday, February 28
6:15-7:00 - Chat Time
7:00-8:00 - Lesson
8:00-9:00 - Critiques

If you have today off because of President's Day or if you are just snuggling down at home because of the weather - today is GREAT day to write! I'm home today so feel free to give me a call if you need help on any particular project.

Stay warm!

Louise Bergmann DuMont
Author of: FAITH-DIPPED CHOCOLATE & GRACE BY THE CUP
Coming Soon: THE STRENGTH OF A WHISPER

How Long from "Idea" to "Book"

A number of you have asked me how long it takes to get a book from conception to publication. I've been reading posts in regard to this topic on an other writers list. Below is a blend of my own experience and the information I gathered from others.

BOOK TIMELINE - From conception to Publication

1. From idea to proposal
This will depend on your proposal experience. For a person writing their first proposal it may take six months. For someone who has done it before, it will probably take two or three months. Your proposal has to be at least as good as the book itself or a publisher won’t bite.
2. From proposal to acceptance by an agent
Three to six months. This is assuming you don’t already have an agent. If you have an agent you simply pitch blurbs and when she thinks an idea is good, she asks for the proposal. Assuming you don’t have an agent yet and the proposal is fabulous it could take only a few weeks. If the proposal is less than stellar, it could take six years to forever for an agent to bite.
3. From agent to publisher
Three to six months. If you are a new author it could take a little bit longer.
4. From publisher to contract
Another three to six months as it goes through the various committees.
5. From contract to finished manuscript
This depends on a lot of things – do you have a full time job, do you run a number of ministries that take up your time, how fast do write, do you need to hire an editor or do you know an editor close to home who will review the manuscript as you complete it? Most writers ask for 9 to 12 months to write their books. Authors pitching their first manuscript probably already have the manuscript done when then send in their proposal so they may only ask for 3-6 months in order to edit and review the book before submission. If that part is already done they can submit immediately.
6. From finished manuscript to bookstore shelves
12-18 months. This is the time it takes for the publisher to create a title & cover, run your manuscript through numerous edits, formulate a marketing plan and then print, box and ship your books.
7. From store shelves to receiving a royalty check
9-12 months, depending on when your book releases and when the publisher pays royalties.

Getting your book published takes a long time and it is not easy – but well worth the effort.

Screenwriter Classes - Writers Conference

Blue Ridge Mountains Writers Conference
LifeWay Ridgecrest Conference Center
North Carolina
April 17-21, 2005
Run by the LifeWay Conference Center
http://www.lifeway.com/christianwriters

2005 Conference Theme Verse
We are writing these things so that our joy may be complete.
– 1 John 1:4 Holman CSB

This conference is a mid-sized conference (not as big as Mt Hermon, Glorietta or Florida but bigger than most others) and it is VERY affordable as conferences go. It is one of the few Christian writers conferences that has classes for screenwriters. They will also have the usual classes in fiction, nonfiction articles, greeting cards, devotionals, etc. The Blue Ridge Mountains Writers Conference hosts a good solid staff of editors, publishers and authors and it isn't as far away as the larger conferences.

This conference would be a good choice for someone who has done some writing but is looking for a higher level of instruction than can be obtained from library books and local classes. It also offers excellent networking possibilities and numerous contacts with editors and publishers.

Check out their website to see the staff and class offerings.

Louise Bergmann DuMont
Author of Faith-Dipped Chocolate and Grace by the Cup

Writing Op - Youth Worker Journal

Here is the latest theme list from Youth Worker Journal.

YOUTH WORKER JOURNAL THEME LIST
September/October 2005
"Coming of Age"
In many ways, youth ministry has grown up; how does that change our field? What happens when countries come of age? Or cultural movements (or church movements)? As the adolescent stage grows longer on both ends, how does that affect our understanding of what it means for kids to come of age? How useful are rites of passage in that context? What about a global youth culture? And adults not wanting to grow up?

If you have article ideas on this theme, write "September/October 2005 proposal" in the e-mail subject field, and send an outline and opening paragraph within the email body by April 15 to proposals@youthworker.com. You'll receive a reply no later than August 1.

To improve the chances of being published, we encourage you to check out our "writer¹s guidelines" at http://www.youthworker.com/writers_guidelines.php

Writing Op - Group Publishing

Group Publishing, Inc.
1515 Cascade Avenue
Loveland, CO 80538
970-669-3836

CHILDREN S MINISTRY is the premiere magazine for adults who serve children in the church. Each bimonthly issue is packed with dozens of ideas and inspirational articles to help leaders encourage children to grow spiritually. Each issue also contains five helpful pages to photocopy and send to parents and teachers to give them new ideas and insights into today s kids.

CHILDREN S MINISTRY needs practical articles such as working with volunteers, disciplining children, and communicating with children about faith, morals, money, friends, grades, and choices. Articles on understanding children are also regularly featured. Each issue features regular Ideas Columns such as Preschool Age, Nursery Notes, Reaching Out, Seasonal Specials, Vital Volunteers, Preteen Pointers, Group Games, Family Ministry, Quick Devotions, Teacher Telegram, and For Parents Only. No fiction, prose, or poetry.

WORD LENGTH AND PAYMENT
Feature Articles: 500 to 600 words $125, 800 to 1,100 words $150, 1,200 to 1,700 words $175, 50-word Parent tips $40
Programs: 150-word Ideas articles $40, 150-word teacher tips $40, 150-word parenting tips $40
Payment is on acceptance.
We buy all rights.

MUCH MORE INFO ON SITE:
http://www.cmmag.com/writers_guidelines.asp

NJCWG Member Wins Prestigious Award

Our own Chris Sagona recently was awarded the First Amendment Award from the New Jersey Press Association. This award is given to reporters who have uncovered something that citizens would otherwise not have known and something that changed the community after it was revealed. Her story was in competition with numerous other stories throughout New Jersey and this is truly an honor that can be shouted from the roof tops.

On behalf of the NJCWG I wish Chris hearty congratulations. I know this won't be the last writing award offered her .

Title of her investigative series: The Elephant in the Town's Living Rooms
A few of the subtitles in this six part series: Why Homeowners Who Renovate Whisper, The Blueprint For Red Tape, When Too Many Requirements Aren't Enough, and The Secret's Out!
Results of Her Investigative Piece: municipal firings, laws were changed AND her articles were read on the floor of the state senate

Please join me in congratulating Chris and wishing her addtional future success.

Quote From Chris Sagona: "I feel very blessed and very grateful! Thank you for your prayers!"
To God be the glory!

Louise Bergmann DuMont
word.worker@verizon.net
www.louisedumont.com

Writing Op - NJ Family Magazine

Bob Moran of the NJ Family Magazine sent me the following message.

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Hello Louise:

MaryAnn Dirio recommended that I contact you.

I'm helping NJFPC locate writers that can write for their annual NJ Family Magazine. The theme this year is Judicial Activism.

I've attached the Writer's Guidelines. Please reply and/or forward as you think best.

Thanks,

Bob Moran
C:732-718-1502
bmoran@njfpc.org

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NJ Family Magazine: Writer’s Guidelines
Magazine Established: 2002
Publisher: New Jersey Family Policy Council
Website: http://www.njfpc.org
Editor: Linda Langstaff
Writing Coordinator: Bob Moran
Email: bob.moran@njfpc.org

Description: NJ Family Magazine is a topical, four-color glossy annual, circulation five thousand, published by the New Jersey Family Policy council since 2002.

Needs: Nonfiction only. Subject matter is organized around the theme of the issue. Editor reserves the right to edit for conformance to magazine needs.

Rights: We usually request first North American serial rights in exchange for publication of original, unpublished material. Thirty days after your article is published, you are free to sell it to another publication. We require a brief credit line with any second uses.

Length: Articles run 600 to 1,200 words. Specific requirements will be assigned by Writing Coordinator.

Deadline: Articles need to be submitted January 24 – February 15, 2005. The earlier your article is submitted, the better.

Payment: The NJ Family Magazine is distributed without charge, so there is no payment, except for the opportunity, especially for beginners, to showcase their work and add a notch to their list of credits. Complimentary copies of the magazine in which their article appears are mailed to authors. Published articles may also be made available on our website.

Publicity: Each article will have contact information about the author at the end of it. With your submission submit a headshot, a 1-3 line bio, phone number, and an e-mail address and/or link to your website.

How to Submit: Only E-mail submissions accepted. MS-Word attachments preferred, but will accept submissions in the body of an e-mail. Send to bmoran@njfpc.org. Always keep a typed hard copy or a backup disk of your work for your files.

Response Time: A few days after we receive it, usually no longer than a week.

Tips for Writers: Please proofread your stories and articles. If accepted, we will publish your submission.

How To Proofread Your Own Work: http://freelancewrite.about.com/cs/howto/ht/htproof.htm

Thank you for your interest in the New Jersey Family Magazine.
NJ Family Magazine Writer’s Guidelines

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NJ Family Magazine: Letter of Understanding
Letter of Understanding between (You, the Writer) and the New Jersey Family Policy Council.

The Writer agrees to prepare an Article of ( ) words on the subject of ( ) for delivery between January 31 and February 15,2005. The Writer also agrees to provide one revision of the Article, as needed.

SIGNED,
Author New Jersey Family Policy Council

(Signature)
(Printed name Printed name)
Date

NJ Family Magazine Letter of Understanding

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Need Your Help

Do you know an extraordinary woman of God? Someone who feels she is ordinary but who you feel is an example of extreme faith and servitude? I am looking for SIX very SPECIAL women who are willing to share their lives and experiences with me. No payment is possible for these stories but the women will be blessed to know that God will use their experiences to move others to serve Him. I am looking specifically for women who feel called to the positions mentioned below but who do not necessarily seek or even want positions of honor or authority. They perform their tasks selflessly and for only one reason - because they love Jesus. It may not be easy for them to be what God called them to be - but they do it anyway.

*** If you know of a woman (or women) who fit the following descriptions, please contact me as soon as possible. You can write me at word.worker@verizon.net ***

A Teacher
This does not necessarily mean a school teacher, but she could be one. It may be a woman who is a social worker, a housewife or a corporate business woman. She teaches others how to be a Godly wife, mother, business woman or simply how to walk with Jesus.

A Giver
This would be a woman who has the gift of giving -- unselfishly and conditionally. Not simply a woman who helps out at her local soup kitchen but a woman called to give sacrificially.

A Servant
I believe that women have a natural tendency toward a servant's heart. I am looking for a woman who serves despite her human desire to serve herself. Someone who goes beyond running the VBS program every year or baking cookies for shut-ins. I'm looking for a woman to whom God has given a "special" gift.

A Woman of Exhortation
To exhort means to urge strongly or incite by argument or advice. I'm looking for a woman who incites other woman to Godly behavior using strong words and deeds. Someone who may not be a natural leader but who speaks up because God urges her to do so.

A Leader
Different denominations have different opinions on whether woman should preach or 'lead' both men and women in a congregation. I'm looking to get into this sort of discussion. I AM looking for a woman who is a leader among leaders because God placed her in authority - perhaps despite her own desire for anonymity.

A Woman Who Shows Mercy
This woman should exemplify mercy in its purest form. Someone who is able to show mercy when the world could not. A person who has been so touched by God that mercy leaches from heaven to others through their hands.

THE STRENGTH OF A WHISPER
Book premise:
Every Christian’s life should be a study in enthusiastic anticipation. So why do some women climb out the side window, rather than walk through God's door? I've noticed that there are a few brave souls who strap on their gear and courageously plunge into the adventure that God sets before them. This book is about those women. It is about ordinary women who are called to do something beyond their own strength and outside of their realm of usual experience – a task that requires "radical faith." This book will not only illustrate the lives of six exemplary women; it will encourage the reader to examine her own life. The book will offer the reader innovative thoughts and concrete strategies that foster an ongoing life of service and leadership. Areas covered will include teaching, giving, service, exhortation, leadership, and the showing of mercy (based on Romans 12).

Time is of the essence. Please contact me as soon as possible, even if you just "think" you might have a match for these descriptions.

Thank you and may God bless you for this.

Jehovah-Tsidkenu
The Lord is My Righteousness
Jeremiah 23:1-6

Louise Bergmann DuMont
word.worker@verizon.net
*GRACE BY THE CUP: A BREAK FROM THE DAILY GRIND*, (Revell), October, 2003
*FAITH-DIPPED CHOCOLATE: RICH ENCOURAGEMENT TO SWEETEN YOUR DAY*, (Revell),
January, 2005