Tuesday, July 12, 2005

Book Reviews - Problems and Solutions


A book review that I did is now posted at the WordSmith Writer.
http://wordsmithshoppe.com/Reviews/makingmarriage.htm
For those of you who have trouble writing reviews for books that came across a bit less than stellar, you might want to take a look at this review. I was honest and spoke positively of those things that were true but allowed myself a comment on something that was lacking.

Writing book reviews is a great way to get started in the writing industry AND you get to read free books! My website (www.louisedumont.com) accepts book reviews.

Louise Bergmann DuMont
Author, Speaker & Young Writing Mentor
Recent Releases: Faith-Dipped Chocolate: Rich Encouragement to Sweeten Your Day and Grace by the Cup: A Break From the Daily Grind

Contest - Nonfiction


NWA Non-fiction contest
Deadline: December 31

Note From Louise - This contest offers an excellent opportunity to not only enter a contest, but to gain valuable insight from a professional writer's critique.

*The purpose of the National Writers Assn. Nonfiction Contest is to encourage the writing of nonfiction and recognize those who excel in this field.
*Contest opens October 1, 2005
*All entries must be postmarked by December 31, 2005
*Only unpublished works may be submitted
*Anthology rights will be requested for the first through third place winners
The entry must be accompanied by entry form (photocopies are acceptable)
*Entry fee - $18 per submission, and return SASE if you wish the material and rating sheets returned

Judging will be based on originality, marketability, research, and reader interest. Copies of the judges' evaluation sheets will be sent to entrants furnishing an SASE with their entry. First through fifth place awards will be presented at the NWAF Conference. Other winners will be notified by March. 1st Prize -- $200 and Clearinghouse representation if winner is book proposal; 2nd Prize -- $100; 3rd Prize -- $50; 4th through 10th Places will receive a book of the winner's choice. Honorable Mentions receive a certificate. The entry fee per submission is $18.

If you wish to have your submission critiqued, please request this on the entry form. Entry fees are used to pay judges and prize money. See complete rules and guidelines at our website: www.nationalwriters.com/members/contests/nonfictioncontest

Contest - Dog Stories


2005 Second Annual Dog Story Contest
Deadline: August 1, 2005

Dog Lovers, put your dog out, sit down and write yourfavorite dog story!

To celebrate dog stories and the human-dog bond (andbecause we just love a good dog story), Doghero.com announces its Second Annual Dog Story Contest.

The contest is for non-fiction stories of dog heroes, favorite dogs, and interesting or funny dog stories.

The winner will receive $125, second place $75, and third place $50. Fourth and fifth places will each receive $25. Winning stories (and up to ten honorable mention stories) will be posted on www.doghero.com and considered for publication in an anthology of dog stories.
For complete rules and guidelines, visit our website at: http://www.doghero.com/features/2005-contest-rules.htm

Monday, July 11, 2005

NJCWG - NO MEETING TONIGHT


Special Message for the NJCWG
NO meeting tonight. The Ringwood Baptist Church is hosting their Serengti Safari (VBS program) tonight. I'm telling the Bible Stories - a task I feel well suited for.

Louise Bergmann DuMont
Faciliator, NJCWG

Friday, July 08, 2005

150th Anniversary of Walt Whitman's, Leaves of Grass



"I lean and loafe at my ease... observing a spear of summer grass."
From Leaves of Grass by Walt Whitman


On July 4, 1855, an unknown poet, Walt Whitman, changed forever the way we would look at poetry. Leaves of Grass came out to mixed reviews and widespread disinterest. It took many years but eventually this book changed the way poets wrote... and the way they thought of themselves.

This summer marks the 150th anniversary of Walt Whitman's, first of its kind, free-verse. Published in July 1855, Leaves of Grass expanded poetry's boundaries.

Thursday, July 07, 2005

New Blog - http://www.patrickotoole.com/


Our very own, Patrick O'Toole has great new blog. His review of the hit movie, War of the Worlds was very intereresting and... written with a unique slant. He did more than simply re-cap the movie, he gave it a very personal touch. Nice job!

Stop by his blog and be sure to leave a "comment." When you do, you might mention that you are a fellow member of the NJCWG and that you saw mention of his blog here - on OUR blog (grin)...

http://www.patrickotoole.com/

Louise Bergmann DuMont
Facilitator NJCWG

Show vs. Tell



Why you should SHOW, rather than TELL, your story...

TELLING gives the reader information about what happened but does not ask them to "be there" for the event.
SHOWING creates a mental picture for the reader. Our society is more visual than ever before and readers insist on visual narrative.

TELLING holds the reader at arms-length. The author is involved -- the reader is not.
SHOWING is participatory. It involves the reader in the story by evoking feelings and by forcing the reader to think for themselves and draw their own conclusions.

TELLING asks the reader to think or act a certain way.
SHOWING unveils the event and lets the reader draw their own conclusion.

TELLING preaches "at" the reader.
SHOWING helps to avoid preachy writing.

TELLING makes the reader feel "dumb" because the author tends to bang them over the head with the details.
SHOWING lets the reader know you think they are smart enough to "get the point" of your manuscript.

Points offered by:
Louise Bergmann DuMont
Founder and Facilitator of the NJCWG
Director of the NJCWG - A Reason to Write Conference

Philadelphia Christian Writers' Conference


This message came to me from Marlene Bagnull. She gave me permission to post this on our blog.

TO NJCWG MEMBERS: A number of NJCWG members have attended the Philly conference in the past. If you want to attend this year's conference, let me know and I'll see who else is going. You might be able to car pool.


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Greater Philadelphia Christian Writers Conference
August 18 - 20, 2005
Holding Out the Word of Life
Shine out among them like beacon lights,
holding out to them the Word of Life.
Philippians 2:16 tlb
www.writehisanswer.com/Philadelphia
Marlene Bagnull
Founder & Director

New Hands-On Opportunities at This Year's Conference & Scholarship Help (if needed) for a Member of Your Group
In 1983 I founded the Greater Philadelphia Christian Writers Fellowship and planned our first day-long seminar. I've often said that if I knew how God was going to grow this ministry, my lack of confidence in myself would have caused me to run the other way. But God has patiently shown me that self-confidence isn't the answer. God-confidence is what's important! And so what started as a day-long seminar in 1983 has grown to a three-day conference with a faculty, this year, of 53 authors, editors, and agents. God surely is doing "exceedingly, abundantly beyond . . ."

One of the challenges of directing for over twenty years is to keep the conference fresh and new. Therefore, this year, I've expanded the hands-on opportunities.
~ * ~ * ~ * ~
Fiction Clinic with editor and fiction coach, Kathleen Wright
Energize your stalled story.
Revitalize your flat characters.
Discover how to draw readers into your character's journey
while building to an exciting climax.
In this six-hour clinic, Kathleen will analyze a 1-2 page synopsis and first chapter (maximum 12 pages) of your novel and determine its strengths and weaknesses. She will demonstrate hands-on techniques that you will practice on your own story. Learn by doing! "In working with clients," Kathleen says, "I have observed that problems fall into common areas: tension through focus, The Five Levels of Intensity, goal-motivation-conflict and story gaps with the Hero's Journey."
Best-selling novelist, Lauraine Snelling, says:
"Kathleen has an innate sense of story structure. She can find holes in the
story and problems with point of view and characters with the accuracy of an
Olympic marksman."
~ * ~ * ~ * ~
Nonfiction Clinic with Mark Littleton, a prolific author of more than 80 books and literary agent.
Do those rejection letters keep rolling in? Learn how to hone a manuscript that will excite an agent or an editor. Find and fix common problems that can get in the way of becoming a successful non-fiction writer. In this six-hour clinic Mark will demonstrate hands-on techniques for you to practice in each session based on the book proposal and first chapter (maximum 12 pages) submitted by group members prior to the conference. By the end of this clinic, you’ll have a marketable proposal ready to go . . . or close to it!
~ * ~ * ~ * ~
Each clinic is LIMITED to 10 serious authors. You need to be registered for the entire conference to participate in one of the clinics. Click on "Clinics" at www.writehisanswer.com/Philadelphia for an application. Your application needs to be received (via email) no later than JULY 23. The clinics are held during the 6 hour-long workshops.
~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~
New Hands-On Workshop Track (for those not in one of the clinics)
Choose 6 hour-long workshops from the 42 offered, including these new hands-on workshops:
Spurring Your Creativity
Selling What You Write
Beware: 28 Pitfalls Ahead
Overcoming Writer's Block
Bringing People to Life
How to Edit Your Own Manuscript
~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~ * ~
8 Continuing Sessions
Fiction 101 ~ Randy Ingermanson
Let There Be Lights...Camera...Action ~ Kathryn Mackel
Nonfiction that Impacts Lives and the Kingdom ~ Craig Bubeck
Spirituality vs Strategy ~ Allison Gappa Bottke
Write Expectations ~ Lisa Crayton
Writing to Change Lives ~ Donna Partow
Writing for Children ~ Cindy Kenney,
Tim Shoemaker, Etta Wilson, Jennifer Reed, & Karen Whiting
and new this year
The Nangie Experience for Advanced Novelists
Nancy Rue & Angie Hunt
NOTE: The application for The Nangie Experience
(click Continuing Sessions at www.writehisanswer.com/Philadelphia)
needs to be received by email no later than July 23.
~ * ~ * ~ * ~
Please forward this email to members of your group and encourage them to pray about coming. If there is someone in your group who has financial need, I'll be glad to work with you. Please contact me ASAP either by email or calling 610-626-6833 or (if you get a recording) 610-209-2623.
In His Service - Marlene
For more conference info visit:
www.writehisanswer.com/Philadelphia

The Greater Philadelphia Christian Writers Conference
is more than a place to meet editors and learn the craft.
It is truly a spiritual retreat
for all those called to write as ministry and mission.
Even as a teacher, I always leave hearing God more clearly.
Nancy Rue - Award-winning author

Encouraging and equipping you to write about a God who is real,
who is reachable, and who changes lives!
_______________________________________________
Marlene Bagnull, Litt.D.
Encouraging & equipping Christians to "write His answer" through
books, tapes, seminars, mentoring, and conferences since 1983!

Greater Philadelphia Christian Writers Conference
August 18-20, 2005 at Philadelphia Biblical University, Langhorne, PA

Colorado Christian Writers Conference
May 17-20, 2006 at YMCA of the Rockies, Estes Park, CO

www.writehisanswer.com
316 Blanchard Road, Drexel Hill, PA 19026-3507
610-626-6833
_______________________________________________________

"Write my answer on a billboard, large and clear, so that anyone
can read it at a glance and rush to tell the others." Habakkuk 2:2 TLB
_______________________________________________________

Wednesday, July 06, 2005

Writing Op - Terrain.Org



Terrain.org: A Journal of the Built & Natural Environments

Terrain.org is an online twice-yearly journal critically acclaimed for its literary and technical contributions relating to the built and natural environments.

PRIZES: Publication (in other words -- no monetary payment at this time)
REQUIREMENTS: We accept fiction and articles. View Terrain.org at http://www.terrain.org for samples of what we prefer, as well as submission guidelines.
WEB: http://www.terrain.org
SUBMISSIONS: editors@terrain.org
CONTACT: Simmons Buntin
TELEPHONE: (520) 241-7390

Writing Op - The Subway Chronicles



The Subway Chronicles
DEADLINE: 25th of each month
PUBLICATION: Monthly
REQUIREMENTS: We are seeking creative nonfiction essays ranging from 1,000 to 3,000 words, centering on experiences on the New York subway system. We are looking for literary work that emphasizes craft and precision, dynamic characters, and strong plot. Simultaneous submissions accepted, if notified. Include brief cover letter of how to contact you, and include word count.
FEES: None
WEB: http://www.thesubwaychronicles.com/

Writing Op - Adoptive Family



GUIDELINES

Adoptive Families is the leading information resource for families before, during, and after adoption. The award-winning national bimonthly magazine provides independent, authoritative adoption information in an accessible and reader-friendly format.

Each issue of Adoptive Families is built around stories of adoption written by people who read the magazine closely and regularly. This active community of readers also offers thoughtful, deeply felt responses to the pieces we publish.

We want to hear your stories. We encourage you to share your insights and experiences with other adoptive families. And we're always looking for great writing.

Core topics covered in every issue:
Preparing for adoption; health issues; school and education; family, friends, and community; birthfamilies; talking about adoption; parenting tips and guidelines

DEPARTEMENTS

The Waiting Game: A special section for pre-adopters. Parenting the Child Who Waited: Raising children who have lived without a permanent family
About Birthparents: Stories about, and sometimes by, birthfamilies
Been There: Adults speak honestly about their experiences of growing up adopted
Adoption & School: Advice from teachers, parents, and experts on education-related issues
In My Opinion: An editorial on a controversial subject
At Home: A personal essay
Single Parent: Single parents share their experiences
Living with Diversity: For and by families who’ve adopted transracially or from other cultures
Parent Exchange: Readers share information with the Adoptive Families community
Letters: Responses from readers to past articles and other readers' letters
Lois Melina's Adopted Child: A regular column by the nation's leading expert on parenting adopted children
Growing Up Adopted: Age-specific developmental information from experts, including adoption pediatricians, members of the American Academy of Pediatrics
Legal Q&A: Leading adoption attorneys answer readers' questions
Calendar of Events: Parents support group events around the country
Book Reviews: Reviews by knowledgeable reviewers
Adoption New and Notes: Legislative and policy updates, with occasional "News Focus" articles elaborating on a particular item or issue in the news
Bulletin Board: Resources for Adoptive Families

(Departments listed above from "The Waiting Game" down through "Letters" are ones for which we typically accept submissions.)

HOW TO SUBMIT AN ARTICLE OR ESSAY

Personal essays: Before sending us your personal essay, we recommend that you take a look at the suggestions below, under "What We're Looking For."

Reported articles on adoption-related topics: In the case of reported articles on adoption-related topics, we prefer that you send a query letter (via e-mail or regular mail) before sending in your article. Again, take a look at recent issues of the magazine; we're less likely to publish a piece on a topic we’ve recently covered.

Query letters should include:
• A brief description or outline of your idea
• Why you think it belongs in our magazine
• Why you should be the one to write it
• If possible, a sense of where in the magazine you believe your story might fit, whether as a feature or in a particular department; see list of departments above
• Any recent clips you may have

How to send them:
• We prefer to receive submissions via e-mail, as attachments. But we accept submissions via US mail, as well.
• You may also wish to send family photographs with your story, particularly in the case of personal essays. We prefer scanned photos e-mailed as attachments. We can also use prints sent by mail, but we cannot guarantee that unsolicited photographs will be returned.

When you'll hear from us, payment, etc.:
• It generally takes us 6-8 weeks to respond to a submission.
• Writers of personal essays we publish will receive a one-year subscription to the magazine. Payment for reported articles varies. We're a small magazine; our pay rates are scaled accordingly.
• We consider all submissions on a speculative basis. We cannot guarantee that a proposed article, even one that we've expressed interest in, will be published.
• We cannot assume responsibility for unsolicited material or guarantee its return.
• You should submit a brief, two- or three-sentence biographical note at the end of each submission.

Send queries and submissions to:
Susan Caughman, Adoptive Families, letters@adoptivefamilies.com
or
39 W. 37th St.
15th Floor
New York, NY 10018

THING THAT WILL HELP YOU GET PUBLISHED IN ADOPTIVE FAMILY

• Know the magazine. Look through past issues. Get a sense of our general tone. Familiarize yourself with the topics we generally cover. Consider which of our departments your story might best fit.
• Have a clear sense of your central theme. (E.g., "How I included extended family in our adoption process," "Traditions and rituals bind families together," "Networking can help to make the waiting period less agonizing.") Think about what makes your story unique—or what useful information families in similar situations might gain from it.
• Keep it active. Describe not only what happened to you, but how you chose to deal with it.
• Focus on choices made and strategies used to deal with a particular situation. (E.g., "We realized our parents weren't ready to be supportive, and we didn't have the energy to deal with their criticism on every single point, so we offered them only general information as we progressed through the adoption process;" "When my daughter started being questioned by her classmates about her adoption, I offered her teacher tips on how to inform the class about adoption in general without invading any individual student's privacy.") Keep it active. Describe not only what happened to you, but how you chose to deal with it.
• Be specific. The more specific the details you provide, the more useful—and engaging—your story will be for other adoptive families. And bear in mind, even the most "ordinary" of experiences—the ones many people share—can be extraordinarily inspiring to read about. Other readers can learn from your experiences—even from your mistakes. We do receive many, many "How I Adopted" stories. But each of these can offer something unique if it maintains a strong focus on a central theme.

Typical subjects and themes:
For a quick glimpse of themes and subjects other Adoptive Families writers have explored, read the "decks" (the lines that appear between the title and the beginning of the story) in articles from past issues.

Areas we are currently looking to cover:
• Middle-school and teen years
• Relatives and community
• Adoptive parent support groups
• School
• Foster adoption
• Transracial adoption
• Domestic adoption
• Adoptive parents of color

What we're NOT looking for:
We are not accepting submissions of poetry or fiction at this time.

Tuesday, July 05, 2005

Writing Op - Good Old Days Mag


Name of Magazine: Good Old Days
Publisher: House Of White Birches
Frequency: monthly
Does NOT Accept Email Submissions
Website URL: http://www.goodolddaysonline.com
Description: A look into the past through photos, drawings, cartoons, comics, memories, features, songs, poems, letters, first-person narratives, and recipes.
Editor(s): Ken Tate
Email: Editor@GoodOldDaysOnline.com
Guidelines URL: http://www.goodolddaysonline.com/pages/magazineinfo.html
Address: Good Old Days
306 East Parr Road
Berne, IN 46711

Writing Op - Paying Mkt for Poetry - Blue Mountain Arts



Blue Mountain Arts is interested in reviewing writings that would be appropriate for publication on our greeting cards. We are looking for highly original and creative submissions on love, friendship, family, philosophies, and any other topic that one person might want to share with another.

Please note that we do not accept rhyming poetry.

To submit your work or to request a copy of our writer's guidelines, please email us at editorial@sps.com
or
write to us at:
Blue Mountain Arts, Inc.
Editorial Department
Post Office Box 1007
Boulder, CO 80306

Publisher: SPS Studios, Inc.
Accepts Email Submissions: Yes
Website URL: http://www.sps.com
Description: Publisher of original, sensitive poetry and prose on love, friendship, family and philosophies for use in greetings cards and books.
Email: editorial@spsstudios.com

Thursday, June 30, 2005

Writing Op - Children's Market


From the editor of The Kids' Ark
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The Kids' Ark is a 24-page, 4-color, monthly Christian magazine for children ages 6-12. Each issue is based on a theme (ie: Love, Faith, Obedience, etc.) The magazine offers games, puzzles, comics and Christian fiction stories.

Three fiction stories are used in each issue. Average story length is 600 words and should be written for the 6-8 year old reading level.

Each accepted story pays $100 for First Time North American rights with rights to reprint at a later date. $25 will be paid per story for reprints. Stories should be engaging and applicable to the monthly theme.

Currently, the Ark is accepting story submissions focused on victory.
The deadline for stories is July 22.
Stories should be submitted as e-mail attachments to writingwonder78@yahoo.com.


The Kids’ Ark Purpose: Our whole purpose is to enlighten children with the love and power of God through Jesus. We believe that God wants the best for His children and that through a faith and knowledge of Him, they can have a happy and prosperous life. We also feel that only through Christ can children withstand the temptations and trials that they are being exposed to in these times.

God bless,
Joy Mygrants
Senior Editor
The Kids’ Ark

Cafe Mocha "Light"



My new blog is up and running. Check it out.
www.cafemochalight.blogspot.com

--

Louise Bergmann DuMont
www.cafemochalight.blogspot.com
www.louisedumont.com
Jehovah-Meqaddeshkem
(The Lord Makes Me Holy)
Author, Speaker & Writing Mentor
Recent Releases: Grace By The Cup & Faith-Dipped Chocolate

Writing Op - New Jersey Monthly



The Magazine of the Garden State
New Jersey Monthly, LLC
55 Park Place
P.O. Box 920
Morristown, NJ 07963-0920

Contact: Christopher Hann, senior editor

Phone: (973)539-8230
Fax: (973)538-2953
E-Mail: editor@njmonthly.com
Website: http://www.njmonthly.com/

Magazine covering "just about anything to do with New Jersey, from news, politics, and sports to decorating trends and lifestyle issues. Our readership is well-educated, affluent, and on average our readers have lived in New Jersey 20 years or more.

EDITOR'S TIP: "The best approach: Do your homework! Read the past year's issues to get an understanding of our well-written, well-researched articles that tell a tale from a well-established point of view."

EDITOR'S NOTE: This magazine continues to look for strong investigative reporters with novelistic style and solid knowledge of New Jersey issues.

75-80% freelance writtenEstablished: 1976Circulation: 95,000
Pays on completion of fact-checking.
Publishes manuscript 3 months after acceptance.
Byline given.
Offers 20% kill fee.
Rights purchased: First North American serial rights
Editorial lead time 3 months.Submit seasonal material 6 months in advance
Accepts queries by: Mail, E-mail, Fax, Phone
Accepts simultaneous submissions
Responds in 2 months to queries.

SPECIAL NEEDS: Book excerpts, Essays, Exposé, General Interest, Historical, Humor, Interview/Profile, Personal Experience, Photo Feature, Travel (within New Jersey), arts, sports, politics.
DOES NOT WANT: "No experience pieces from people who used to live in New Jersey or general pieces that have no New Jersey angle."

Buys 90-100 manuscripts/year.
Submission method: Query with published magazine clips and SASE.
Length: 800–3,000 words.
Pays $750-2,500.
Pays reasonable expenses of writers on assignment with prior approval.

Columns open to freelancers:

EXIT RAMP (back page essay usually originating from personal experience but written in a way that tells a broader story of statewide interest), 1,200 words.
Buys 12 columns/year.
Submission method: Query with published clips
Pays $400.

Fillers: Needs Anecdotes (for front-of-book)
Buys 12-15 fillers/year.Length: 200–250 words.
Pays: $100

Wednesday, June 29, 2005

NJCWG - Reminder


~The NJCWG~

NO meeting on 7/11/05 due to the church's VBS using the facility

NEXT MEETING - 7/25/05

Writing Op - Cornerstone



Cornerstone is looking for manuscripts!

FICTION
We accept book-length fiction and short stories. A Christian message is not necessary, but it should reflect a Christian worldview, and have a point. No sex scenes. We are looking for a good story, not a good sermon. We are also looking for literary fiction more than popular fiction. We have not published much fiction but are presently looking for insightful, compelling writing. Both adult fiction and children¹s fiction are welcome.

NONFICTION
We are looking for well-documented nonfiction which addresses relevant social issues or ministry issues.

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MAKE SURE you go to their web site and read all the way through their submission guidelines before doing anything. And please... FOLLOW THE GUIDELINES when you send in your proposal. Otherwise, you might as well toss your stuff straight into the trash, saving postage and avoiding the middleman (since that's probably what they'll do to stuff that doesn't fit what they're looking for).

Go to http://www.cornerstonepress.com/info/writers.html

Writing Op - website content


From one of our newest members, Pat Russo

We're looking for someone to plan and write Web content for the Wells Fargo Home Mortgage public Web site (my day job). Should be someone who is a strong writer and familiar with Web development. There's no coding involved; only writing. Any financial services or mortgage background is a plus. This person will work closely with marketing and various lines of business.

Apply for the position on Monster.com HYPERLINK
http://jobsearch.monster.com/getjob.asp?JobID=31104792&AVSDM=2005%2D06%2D15+18%3A29%3A04&Logo=1&cn=wells+fargo&lid=532&lid=534&sort=rv&vw=b&cy=US&brd=1,128,1862,1863

Picnic Update



Although rain forced us indoors, "a good time was had by all" pretty much sums up the annual NJCWG picnic. The food was amazing! Have you ever tried a Spinach Salad with Strawberries or Potato Salad with no mayonnaise? Yum. My veggie platter (a Stop and Shop speical) just didn't seem equitable.

Our readings brought on everything from belly laughs to tears. The group read out some of their best work ever. I was pleased to hear two published pieces by Clare Cartagena and Lisa Ramadan -- both read from the same anthology! The NJCWG was well represented there. Please note that these authors found that market through a listing on THIS BLOG!

Our next NJCWG social event will be our Christmas party (December 12, 2005). If you missed the picnic, you have no excuse to miss our Christmas event. Get it on your calendar today!

God Bless,
Louise Bergmann DuMont
Facilitator, NJCWG

Monday, June 27, 2005

***PICNIC IS STILL ON***

NJCWG - today's picnic will be ON no matter what the weather. Any quesitons, give me a call.

Louise

NJCWG Message


FOR THE NJCWG

NO MEETING TONIGHT AT THE CHURCH and despite the threat of a possible shower, the NJCWG Picnic is ON. Hope to see you there.

If anyone gets lost or needs directions, call me on my cell OR call Val's house.

Louise Bergmann DuMont
Facilitator of the NJCWG

Forwarded from the editor of YouthWorker Journal:

~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Theme List for the January/February 2006 Issue - TRUTH
~~~~~~~~~~~~~
  • What do we know to be true, and how do we know it?
  • What are the different ways in which truth can be known?
  • How do worldview and context play into the way we perceive truth?
  • Is all truth from God? Does it all hold the same authority?
  • What is the nature of truth and what can be known?
  • Which ministerial realities will never change, and what things should we hold more lightly?

If you have article ideas on this theme, write January/February 2006 Proposal in the e-mail subject field, and send an outline and opening paragraph within the e-mail body by August 15, 2005 to proposals@youthworker.com. You'll receive a reply no later than December 1, 2005.

To improve the chances of being published, we encourage you to check out our writer's guidelines at www.youthworker.com/writers_guidelines.php

Sunday, June 26, 2005

Writing Op - MORE Cup of Comfort



Cup of Comfort

Writers' Guidelines:
http://www.cupofcomfort.com/share.htm
Do you have the next Cup of Comfort story brewing in your life???
  • Adoptive Families
  • Animal Lovers
  • Bereaved
  • Blended Families
  • Fathers and Daughters
  • Midlife Women
  • Parents of Children with ADHD
  • Seniors
  • Singles
  • Working Moms

Writing Op - Cup of Comfort


A Cup of Comfort for Parents of Children with Autism New!

A child's diagnosis of autism usually strikes fear in the hearts of parents—and often turns their world upside-down and their lives inside-out. The incidence of this mysterious neurobiological disorder has risen dramatically in recent years, leaving parents in search of answers, support, and hope. For this collection of 50 inspiring stories, we seek personal anecdotal stories (not prescriptive articles) about the unique aspects of parenting a child with autism and related disorders will provide parents of children with autism and related disorders (Asperger syndrome, Rett's disorder, disintegrative disorder, pervasive developmental disorder). Possible themes include, but are not limited to: impact on other members of family; creative solutions to everyday challenges; breakthroughs; effective treatments; silver linings; tender moments; helpful support; unexpected positive outcomes; blessings large and small; reasons for hope; adult children with autism. We are most interested in stories written by parents, but will also consider and likely publish some stories written by professionals and family members or friends with intimate knowledge of the child and parents in question.

Submission Deadline: October 1, 2005
Finalist Selection Deadline: January 1, 2006

For complete guidelines go to: http://www.cupofcomfort.com/share.htm

Note : Submissions are reviewed throughout the submission period; early entry is encouraged. Deadlines are sometimes extended.

Saturday, June 25, 2005

Wikipedia


This post is to let you know about a great website for author info - it is called Wikipedia. This online resource can be a valuable tool. If you are looking for historical information you simply type in the date that you need and Wikipedia will give you information about events that took place, individuals who were born or died that year... even the price of eggs if that is what you want.
IMPORTANT NOTE: Since this site allows anyone to edit entries at any time and for any reason, whether or not they are qualified, entries should be taken with a grain of salt and ALWAYS double-checked against a more reputable site.
That said, I still think this is a great place to start your research.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Main_Page

Picnic Reminder


NJCWG SUMMER PICNIC
Monday, June 27, 2005
6:30 - ???
NO MEETING AT THE CHURCH
Raindate: Wednesday, June, 29, 2005
PLACE: The Schermerhorn's, 402 Jersey Ave, Greenwood Lake, NY 10925
(If you need directions to their house, call me)

FOR NJCWG MEMBERS

A nice group (with and without families) have signed up for our NJCWG 2005 Picnic. We always have a wonderful time, so don't be shy. Even you new to our group you will enjoy your self at this summer social event. If you just realized that you will be able to attend, let me know!

Louise Bergmann DuMont
Facilitator, NJCWG
njcwg.dumont@gmail.com

Wednesday, June 22, 2005

Writing Op - Highlights Magazine



I received this from an editor at Highlights for Children who encouraged me to pass it along.

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HIGHLIGHTS NEEDS

From Kim Griswell, Coordinating Editor

Arts articles that have true kid-appeal. Kids are drawn to all kinds of arts, but they are probably not in a museum appreciating great works. We must meet them where they are.

Travel and adventure articles with a kid-friendly focus or a deeper meaning to share--a lesson learned, better understood a culture, a discovery made, etc.

From Andy Boyles, Science Editor

Our guidelines state that our word limit is 800, but articles that are even shorter (350-400 words) are especially welcome. We put a high value on articles that show science as a process, articles that follow a scientist or group of scientists as they try to solve one of nature's mysteries. We currently have what we need in the way of articles about: birds, reptiles and amphibians, insects (especially bees), and volcanoes.

From Marileta Robinson, Senior Editor

We need stories for young readers at first- and second-grade reading levels, 500 words or fewer. I would like to see stories with holiday themes, especially dealing with the real meaning of the holidays of various religions. Also stories with sports themes for younger children.

From Carolyn Yoder, History/World Cultures Editor

Multicultural articles, particularly first-person accounts. Historical looks at major holidays--Thanksgiving, Christmas, Passover, Hanukah, July 4, Labor Day. Biographies of major historical figures--Martin Luther King, Jr. and Civil Rights. Articles on immigrant history.

From Judy Burke, Associate Editor

Nonfiction sports:
Articles that focus on a known athlete (a squeaky clean one), those that focus entirely on the development of specific skills, and those that address challenges faced by athletes of any kind (ex: being smaller than your teammates, staying calm under pressure, etc.). Successful articles often include quotes gained from personal interviews with athletes or experts and useful tips for readers who play that sport.

Fiction:
800-word stories for 8- to 12-year-olds. Humorous stories, Easter stories (no Easter bunnies as characters, though), Passover stories, and stories involving Ramadan, Eid ul-Fitr, or
Eid ul-Adha.
400-word humorous stories for 8- to 12-year-olds also needed.

Nonfiction:
300-word activity articles. Successful ones often include a short introduction and a few short activities with a common theme.

From Joelle Dujardin Kirkland, Associate Editor

Crafts: crafts with boy-appeal, games, holiday crafts, and crafts from other cultures (with background included).
Younger nonfiction (450 words or fewer): first-person accounts of fieldwork, arts stories, biographies with interesting slants, kids living in other cultures, ancient history, animals, details from urban life (workers, transportation, etc.).
Gallant Kids: leads (or articles) on kids doing service in their communities--especially children of color.

From George Brown, Assistant Editor

I'm looking for puzzles and short activities that encourage children to think in a creative way without relying on prior knowledge of specific facts. These puzzles should not require the use of pen or pencil to solve them.
I'm also interested in finger-play activities and step and repeat
stories
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General request

We're looking for proposals for inside-back covers. Since there's little text, ideas need to be fresh and clear, possibly with a few activities within the page, and clear art instructions. Highlights recommends reviewing their submission guidelines and back issues at local libraries before submitting a manuscript. Material should be fresh and exciting. Guidelines are available at www.highlights.com

Please send submissions to the specific editor listed above,
or
Manuscript Coordinator
Highlights for Children
803 Church Street
Honesdale, PA 18431

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Tuesday, June 21, 2005

Four New Writing Ops


The Sweet Spot
  • New Ezine by Tonya Stokes
  • Most genres accepted (No horror, No erotica& No profanity)
  • Especially interested in Inspirational Romance
  • The first issue scheduled for July 2005.
  • OPEN Market
  • http://thesweetspot.home.att.net/

Book Contributions -- What's In It For Me
  • by Tonya Stokes, Editor, The Sweet Spot
    Tentative Title: What's in It for Me? Faith-Building Stories of How the Bible Has Changed People's Lives
  • Submissions Needed
  • While most Christians have experienced comfort, encouragement, and instruction from God's Word, the editor of this new book is interested in specific instances where a particular Scripture verse/passage provided clear guidance, comfort, inspiration, conviction, humility, encouragement, etc.
  • Contact: dhill@hilbilt.com -- put SUBMISSION in the subject line and include contact information (email address, physical address, and phone number) within your email.
  • The story doesn't need to be in perfect form; editor will develop and edit as needed.
  • Manuscript is in the proposal stage. No promise of remuneration.
  • When the project is picked up by a publisher those chosen to participate will receive a copy of the book, a biographical paragraph within the book, and possibly a small honorarium.

Book Contributions -- When Your Babies Are Too Big to Rock L.O.V.E. Them
  • Tentitive Title: When Your Babies Are Too Big to Rock L.O.V.E. Them: Helping Older and Adult Children Through Crises
  • L.O.V.E. is an acrostic for Listen to their heart (without speaking your mind), Offer Advice Carefully, Verify the Truth of Who They Are in Christ, and Everything to God in Prayer--Share Carefully with Others.
  • Author needs serious and humorous stories of parents and children who have successfully worked through these areas. Also needs stories of "what not to do" AND stories of parents who have had to "release" their child to the Lord's care because the child refuses to cooperate with given direction and help.
  • Any of these can be from the parent's or the child's perspective.
  • Names can be changed as needed.
  • Stories may be edited for clarity or space, while retaining integrity of the story.
    There is no payment in this project, but each story that is accepted if this book goes to publication will receive a free copy.
  • NO QUERY
  • SEND COMPLETE STORY ASAP to: janet@janetbirkey.com

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Quarterly Journal - Reverent Submissions Journal

  • New theme-based quarterly Journal, Reverent Submissions Journal, with Christian-focused articles in all genres.
  • Inaugural issue (August) - Deadline June 20, 2005
  • Next issue (November) - Deadline is September 29, 2005
  • Check the following link for complete announcement and details about this new publication and opportunity for writers. http://wordsmithshoppe.com/revsubmission.htm


The 2005 Annual Rogers Communication Literary Non-fiction Contest
  • September 30, 2005
  • Winning entry will be published in the 2006 Winter Issue of PRISM international with an additional payment of $20 per printed page (in Canadian dollars or U.S. equivalent).
  • Submit no more than 25 pages, typed (12 pt font), double-spaced, on letter-sized white paper.
  • Entry fee is $27 for one manuscript of nonfiction, plus $7 for each additional manuscript.
  • Once an entry is received, no revisions will be allowed, and entry fees become non-refundable.
  • The winner will be notified by January 2006.
  • http://prism.arts.ubc.ca/contests/rogers.htm

Southern Hum Fiction and Poetry Contest.
  • Deadline: July 1, 2005
  • Seeks writing that is uniquely southern and explores southern life, traditions, or just what it means to be southern, or the southern experience. However, please do not send genre writing, or writing that is stereotypical in its treatment towards the South. Do send writing that is fresh in its approach to the South.
  • A writer does not have to be currently residing in the South, nor does the story have to be set in the south, but the writing should address some view(s) of the South or a southern experience. $250 prize in each category.
  • Electronic entry OK.
  • EMAIL: southern_hum@yahoo.com
    URL: http://www.southernhum.com/guidelines/

14th Annual Contest for a First Middle-Grade Novel
  • Deadline: June 30, 2005.
  • For US and Canadian writers who have not previously published a novel for middle-grade readers
  • 96-160 manuscript pages.
  • Contemporary or historical fiction set in North America, for readers age 9–12.
  • Sponsored by Delacorte Dell Yearling.
  • $1,500 in cash and a $7,500 advance against royalties, plus book contract (on the Publisher’s standard form) for a hardcover and a paperback edition.
  • Delacorte Dell Yearling Contest, Random House, Inc., 1745 Broadway, 9th Floor, New York, NY 10019
  • http://www.randomhouse.com/kids/writingcontests/

The Abilene Writers Guild's annual Writing Workshop and Contest
  • October 22, 2005 -- luncheon and contest awards to follow
  • Everyone is welcome to participate. Workshop speaker is Michelle Medlock Adams, prolific author in Children's Literature, Inspirational books, and Journalism. Writing contest has cash prizes in 9 categories.
  • Manuscripts must be postmarked before August 1, 2005.
  • For information visit www.abilenewritersguild.org

Six Week Email Classes from Wordsmith Writer



Here is a message from Peggy Phifer,
the editor of the Wordsmith Writer.


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Something New!! Janice Thompson will be bringing us a course on "Getting Creative About Being Creative" in an email lesson format beginning Monday, July 11, 2005, and running for six weeks, ending the week of August 15th.

Here is the layout of Janice's Classes:
WEEK ONE: Building Your Writing House (with a thorough introduction to biblical creativity)
WEEK TWO: Sensory Writing
WEEK THREE: Personification
WEEK FOUR: Creative Characterization
WEEK FIVE: Field Trip Ideas for Creative Thinkers
WEEK SIX: Creatively Improving Your Writing Skills

Here's how it works: This is an interactive class. Each Monday of the course, Janice (or the current instructor) will send out the week's lesson and assignment. You will have the entire week to work on it, fully able to post questions throughout the week, and Janice will respond. The cost of this course is $15, payable through your PayPal account or online at PayPal using a credit card. This small fee will be for the entire course and will go to the support of Wordsmith Shoppe.

Each course will be conducted via email. There is no specific online time or location - all you need is a valid email address.

To register for the class send an email to: WSClass-subscribe@topica.com. Registration will be approved upon verification of your class fee.

Mark your calendars for July 11, and get your registration fee paid in plenty of time so there will be no delay in getting into the class when we begin. Click here to register now.

I am really excited about this new way to help writers. These courses will be a more "hands-on" class than we are able to cover in a one-hour chat. I sincerely hope you'll consider taking part. I'm looking for other classes to bring to you in the coming months.

Coming in September:
Authors should consider the very real benefits of creating a newsletter as a huge tool to help with their marketing strategy. I am working with Staci Stallings to bring this course to Wordsmith Shoppe. It would start -tentatively - in September and run for about eight weeks, ending in mid-to late November.

Monday, June 20, 2005

The Invisible Gorilla



OPINION PIECE
by Louise Bergmann DuMont


I came across a very interesting study on the internet today. Professor R. Wiseman filmed six teens passing basketballs to each other. Three were wearing white shirts and three were wearing black shirts. In an experiment, individuals watching the film were asked to count how many times those wearing white shirts passed the ball.

After the video was over, the individuals watching the video were asked if anything unusual occurred during the film. Hundreds were interviewed and they all said that nothing unusual happened. The strange part is that during the film a man in a gorilla suit walked across the stage, pounded his chest, and walked off the other side of the stage. Yet not one single person watching the video remembered seeing this happen - despite the fact that it was obvious to them when they watched the clip a second time. Many insisted that a different clip had been substituted for the original because they could not believe that they didn't see the gorilla the first time it was shown.

SO... WHY DIDN'T THEY SEE THE GORILLA?
Because those watching the film were focused on a single task - counting the number of passes made by the teens wearing white shirts.

HOW DOES THIS RELATE TO WRITING?
Tunnel vision occurs when a person tries too hard to make their point. Instead of opening their mind to a fresh approach or incorporating a new idea into an old theme, they focus only on what they previously decdied to present. The writer ignores the gorilla pounding his chest for attention because he never even sees it.

Writers need to look around for the unique approach, the unexpected angle and previously untold story. They need to turn tired old statements into a fresh new commentary. They need to seek lively quotes from unanticipated sources and surprise their reader with previously undiscovered details.

A writer does not need to accept the rest of the world's viewpoint, but they do need to acknowledge the existence and impact of the gorilla in their midst.

To see the film clip I described above, go to this site and click on the small green video dot (or arrow) under the film to start it moving.
http://viscog.beckman.uiuc.edu/grafs/demos/15.html

NOTE: Professor Richard Wiseman has a first-class honors degree in Psychology from University College London, a doctorate from Edinburgh University, and was awarded the prestigious Perrott-Warrick Scholarship from Trinity College Cambridge

Saturday, June 18, 2005

Press Release - Faith Travels


http://www.faith-travels.org/
Faith Travels is looking for Christian testimonies in prose or poetry from adults and children for its newest book.

300-2000 Words
All testimonies must be original
No compensation

Send to: Contribution@Faith-Travels.org

Friday, June 17, 2005

Today is "Eat Your Vegetables Day"


Today's writers must make their writing relevant to the reader. One way to do this is to connect your writing to current events. When you find a "wacky holdiay" that relates to your favorite subject you have a built in writing platform.

Today happens to be National Eat Your Vegetables Day! Since I write a column about chocolate -- and we all know that chocolate is really a vegetable -- I have an opportunity for a column, a short or even a feature story!
Sorry to say you already missed National Hollerin' Contest Day (June 16), National Juggling Day (June 13), National Applesauce Cake Day (June 4) and Natonal Yo-Yo Day (June 6). But don't panic until tomorrow (National Panic Day -- June 18).

I'm sure most of you know that this coming Sunday is Father's Day, but I'll venture to say that most of you don't know about these other June holidays:

REMAINING WACKY JUNE HOLIDAYS
18 Go Fishing Day
18 International Panic Day (OH NO... I forgot to buy my sister a card for this!!!!)
18 National Splurge Day (Oh yeah!! )
19 World Sauntering Day
20 Ice Cream Soda Day (Chocolate Sodas Anyone?)
21 Finally Summer Day (How many days until fall???)22 National Chocolate Eclair Day (Another chocolate story waiting to happen!!!)
23 National Pink Day (I'm going with fushia!)
24 Mid Summer Day
24 Swim a Lap Day (To wear off all those eclairs...)
25 Log Cabin Day
26 Beauticians's Day (Does your beutician know about this?)
26 National Forgiveness Day (This should be EVERY DAY. I see an article in this one! Do you?)
27 Paul Bunyon Day (Celebrate this in a "big" way.)
28 Insurance Awareness Day (Now who do you think invented this one!?!)
28 National Columnist's Day (Why not take a columnist to lunch??)
29 Camera Day
29 Waffle Iron Day (I know what I'm having for breakfast this morning. I think I'll put some chocolate chips in them -- to go with my latest article!)
30 Meteor Day

If you are the sort who can't stand for your holiday to end, you can revel in June's monthly celebrations of the following:

JUNE IS:

  • Aquarium Month
  • Candy Month
  • Dairy Month
  • Fight the Filthy Fly Month
  • National Fresh Fruit and Vegtables Month
  • Rose Month
  • Trukey Lovers Month

For more Wacky Holidays go to: http://http://holidayinsights.com/moreholidays/index.htm


Now get WRITING!

Thursday, June 16, 2005


"What I had to face, the very bitter lesson that everyone who wants to write has got to learn, was that a thing may in itself be the finest piece of writing one has ever done, and yet have absolutely no place in the manuscript one hopes to publish."
--Thomas Wolfe

Writing Op - Writers' Digest



The following was posted in the 6/14/05 Writers Digest online newsletter. For those of you who don't receive it, the magazine is interested in "spiritual" writers. See below:

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YOUR TWO CENTS
We want to know what you think. Tell us about some of your favorite contemporary spiritual writers (authors who specialize in works dealing with faith). How does their writing affect you? We could feature your response in an upcoming WD special publication, Spiritual Writing. Please send your responses with "Spiritual Writers" in the subject line to writersdig@fwpubs.com.

NJCWG Picnic


NJCWG SUMMER PICNIC
Monday, June 27, 2005
NO MEETING THAT NIGHT
See previous post for details.
RSVP on or before 06/17/05

FOR NJCWG MEMBERS

A few members (with and without families) have signed up for our picnic. Tomorrow is the last day to let us know that you want to come. It looks like we're going to have a wonderful time! Don't be shy. Even you are one of our newer members I guarantee you will enjoy your self at this summer social event.

Louise Bergmann DuMont
Facilitator, NJCWG

Tuesday, June 14, 2005

PRESS RELEASE - A Reason to Write


FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE
June 13, 2005

NJCWG – A Reason to Write
The Conference that is Affordable, Informative and Writer Friendly

RINGWOOD, New Jersey
October 8, 2005 The North Jersey Christian Writers’ Group (NJCWG) is sponsoring A REASON TO WRITE, a one-day Christian writers’ conference and workshop, on Saturday, October 8, 2005 from 8:45 AM to 5:00 PM at the Ringwood Baptist Church, 30 Carletondale Road, Ringwood, NJ 07456.

We present a conference that is affordable, informative and writer friendly. Registration is only $30.00 per person and includes: a full day of classes, material packet, a variety of free publications and writers guidelines, access to the NJCWG Writers' Blog, a continental breakfast and a buffet luncheon. Our instructors and staff offer something for every level of expertise and experience. Are you toying with writing for publication? Do you want to hone your existing skills? Would you like to expand into new genres? If so, this is an opportunity you cannot afford to miss.

Louise Bergmann DuMont, facilitator of the NJCWG and Director of A REASON TO WRITE, is quoted as saying:


“Writers’ conferences are exciting and a vital part of every author’s game plan. With today’s busy schedules and tight finances, the NJCWG wants to offer the tri-state writers easy access to an affordable, informative and first-timer friendly inspirational conference. A staff of skilled speakers will present sessions for both aspiring writers and accomplished authors. We are looking forward to an excellent turn-out and hope individuals will register early to secure their place.”
SPEAKERS & STAFF:
Maude Carolan - Noted New Jersey poet and author. Maude facilitates the Paper, Pen & Praise ministry and publishes an inspirational poetry e-letter, "Searching For The One My Heart Loves." She is a three-time finalist in the national Allen Ginsberg Poetry Contest and her poems have appeared in numerous national publications.
Louise Bergmann DuMont - Author & Speaker whose recent titles include: Grace by the Cup: A Break From the Daily Grind & Faith-Dipped Chocolate: Rich Encouragement to Sweeten Your Day.
Dr. Valeria Lovelace - Founder and president of Media Transformations and the lead advisor and curriculum creator of the popular preschool Dora the Explorer television series. She is also the former Vice-President of Sesame Street Research.
Kathryn Mackel - Acclaimed author of Can of Worms and other novels for middle readers (HarperCollins). She is a produced screenwriter (having worked for Disney, Fox, and Showtime) and is the credited screenwriter for Frank Peretti's Hangman's Curse. Her latest novel for adults, The Departed (WestBow Press) exposes the dark side of television mediums.
Rebeca Seitz - Founder and President of Glass Road Public Relations, Nashville, TN. As the first dedicated publicist for Thomas Nelson's fiction imprint, WestBow Press, Rebeca worked with such esteemed authors as Frank Peretti, Ted Dekker, Robin Jones Gunn, Angela Hunt, Michael Morris, Colleen Coble, Kristin Billerbeck, and many others.
Patrick O'Toole - Patrick is a published technical writer and a lifelong student of storytelling. First interested in writing in grade school, he is currently writing a feature length screenplay. Over the past 15 years, Patrick has taught Sessions on personal growth, the scriptures, computer programming and creative writing. He is a programmer by day to support his wife, stepdaughter, two dogs and two cats.
Julianne Weston - Jewelz (as she is known) holds a Bachelor of Arts in Theatre and has studied in various independent acting, writing and directing classes under some of the best in the business. She is a creative writer, playwright, director and stage producer and serves as the president of the Righteous Acts Drama Ministry. She is also the founder and president of Jewelz Weston Productions.
For more information, to receive a brochure or to register for the conference call our Registration Coordinator, Nancy Baker at 973-263-5529 or email Nancy at: flyingswan@optonline.net
CONTACT INFORMATION:
Louise Bergmann DuMont
Facilitator, NJCWG & Director, A Reason To Write

PO Box 36
Ringwood, NJ 07456
551-427-3794
Web: www.louisedumont.com
Blog: www.njcwg.blogspot.com
Email: word.worker@verizon.net
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Brilliant, Not Boring, Nonfiction



Brilliant, Not Boring, Nonfiction
Presented by Louise Bergmann DuMont
At the NJCWG – 6/13/05

PITCH A NEW IDEA
I am often asked where a person can get a handle on the up-and-coming trends. Here are a few ideas.
1. Attend the professional level sessions held at writers' conferences - sometimes called roundtable discussions. Here editors, publishers and agents discuss reader opinions, contracts, hot topics, new styles of writing, and convergence formats.
2. Read "Letters to the Editor" and find out what people are outraged about. They usually react to a development or new trend that they are uncomfortable with. Find out what it is and follow up on it.
3. Read specialty periodicals from time to time. The tighter the focus, the more alert the publication may be to moves and changes in their specific area.
4. Pick the brains of experts. If you go to the doctor or dentist or your family attorney, ask them about new developments in their field, radical changes, breakthrough products or recent seminars they've attended. (Sometimes they will overlap. A surgeon can tell you about the increase in plastic surgeries, and a lawyer can tell you about the increase in lawsuits against surgeons when promises of rejuvenation don't happened.)

PITCH AN OLD IDEA IN A NEW WAY
5. Again, roundtable discussions may alert you to new styles of writing and convergence formats.
6. Watch TV & Read the Headlines - if your agent won't look at another story about a young girl who wants an abortion against her parent's wishes, why not pick up on a story in the headlines to give the abortion issue a new slant. What about the peri-menopausal woman who gets an abortion against the wishes of her three grown children?

BE AN EXPERT
7. In what areas do you feel you have some expertise? People always want to read details not generalities. If you are an expert in something, there will be a depth and flavor to your writing that is not there for someone else.
8. "But I'm not an expert on anything!" If that is your lament, don't fret. You can become an expert your favorite subject by simply putting in a few study hours. Choose a topic that you love (note that coffee & chocolate are already taken). Purchase a few file folders and begin collecting articles, internet sites, and anything else connected with your topic. Join yahoo & google groups that share information about your topic. Speak up! Let others know that YOU know your stuff. Soon, individuals will be emailing you for more info about the topic and you can start a column, a blog or a website that will tout your expertise. Now you have a platform on which to speak, teach and write. Easy as sucking on a chocolate Popsicle!

WRITE TIGHT & SMART
9. I can't say this enough times… learn to write tight. Today's readers don't have the time to weed through long paragraphs. Get to the action or the point quickly.
10. Don't belittle your reader. It is true that repeating something helps the reader to remember it, but repetition does not have to be boring. When you must repeat your point, say it using different words, a new tone or a fresh anecdote.

WRITE CREATIVE NONFICTION
11. Use anecdotes and personal experiences to lead into an idea or to solidify your point. There is enough dry information in the world to fill the Grand Canyon ten times over. Make your manuscript different - make it interesting!

Monday, June 13, 2005

JULY 11 - NJCWG


JULY 11, 2004 - NO NJCWG MEETING
That week our church will be hosting their Serengti Safari (VBS).

NJCWG Picnic


Last year, numerous members requested that we make the NJCWG Picnic an annual event.
This year, only one person signed up to attend.
Deadline to RSVP - Friday, June 10, 2005

Annual NJCWG Summer Picnic!

DATE: Monday, June 27, 2005 (instead of our meeting)
TIME: 6:30 pm
Raindate: Wednesday, June, 29, 2005
PLACE: The Schermerhorn's, 402 Jersey Ave, Greenwood Lake, NY 10925 (Specific directions to their house will be given when you RSVP.)

THE WHOLE FAMILY IS INVITED
This is your family's chance to meet NJCWG members in a social setting.

WHAT SHOULD YOU BRING?
* We are asking each family to bring one generously proportioned side dish AND either chips or beverages.
* Val is cooking up hotdogs and hamburgers.
* If you like to swim, bring your swim suit. Val lives right on the lake.
* If your children are not strong swimmers, please bring the appropriate flotation devices.
* We are doing casual readings after dinner, so get started writing your piece now! Please do keep your reading to one page. Poetry, fiction, nonfiction ... whatever suits you. No assignment and no critiques - just fun.

RSVP REQUIRED
* You MUST RSVP to Louise Bergmann DuMont on or before Friday, 6/18/05
Email: word.worker@verizon.net or Call: 551-427-3794* At that time please let me know what dish you are bringing, whether you are bringing chips or beverages , how many adults will attend and how many children will attend (and their ages).

Sunday, June 12, 2005

NJCWG - Next Meeting Tomorrow


NEXT MEETING
Monday, June 13, 2005
6:15-7:00 - Chat Time
7:00-8:00 - Lesson Time: Writing Brilliant, Not Boring, Nonfiction
8:00-9:00 - critiques

NOTE: We'll be meeting in a different room for this next meeting because the school's nursery school is having their "graduation." Go through the same large white double doors as usual. Instead of bearing left, simply go straight into the first classroom in the hallway. You'll see me in there.